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Polly Bemis: A Pioneer Chinese Woman in the Northwest

Polly Bemis

Pioneer Chinese Woman in the Northwest

By Fanny Wong, New York

In 1872, on a pier in Portland, Oregon, an eighteen-year-old Chinese girl waited. She had been smuggled to America, far away from her village in China.

My father was so poor he sold me for two bags of seeds for the next planting!

The girl closed her eyes and saw the image of bamboo that grew near her old home.

I am like a bamboo. A bamboo bends in the wind. I will bend but not break.

“Gong Heng!” A Chinese man called out.

The girl’s eyes flew open.

“I’m taking you to your master in Warren, Idaho,” said the man.

For nine days, the man led the pack train of mules on mountainous trails to the mining town. For nine days, Gong Heng gazed in wonder at the majestic Northwest wilderness. It helped soothe her worries.

What’s going to happen to me?

In Warren, the mules plodded down a rutted street to a saloon. A stranger hoisted the girl from the mule and announced to the people around, “This is Polly.”

Gong Heng wondered who they were talking about. Soon, she realized that Polly was her new name in this strange new land.

I was born in the year of the ox. I am stubborn and hard working. I will survive and I will go home.

Polly’s owner was an old Chinese man.He put her to work in the saloon. Men came to gawk at the one Chinese girl in town, and stayed to drink and play cards. She served drinks, cleaned tables, and swept floors. Her presence made her master’s saloon different from the others in town, including the one next door, owned by kind Charlie Bemis.

Sometimes Charlie heard trouble brewing in her master’s saloon. He would march over to break up a fight and stay to talk to the cheerful young girl who worked so hard and always had a smile on her face.

Soon Polly, a fast learner, could understand and speak some English.

One night, Polly swept the saloon after the last customer had left. Something on the floor caught her eye. It glittered. It gleamed. It was a gold nugget. She slipped it into her pocket.

A miner must have dropped it when he paid for his drinks with gold dust or a nugget.I may find some more.

On rare nights, she did spy gold dust, flakes and even nuggets. Even though she knew it would take years to scrounge enough gold to buy her freedom, there was hope on the saloon floor.

Month after month passed. Polly was always doing something to save money to buy her freedom. Charlie taught her how to work with gold. Polly made trinkets out of nuggets and sold them. She learned to make bread, stew, sauerkraut, fruit preserves, and other foods the miners liked.

“I learn right along,” she said to Charlie, pointing to her head.

Then everything changed. Polly’s master died. The girl who had been sold for two bags of seeds was now a free woman.

What’s going to happen to me?

 Polly had a big decision to make.

Should I buy passage back to China with my money? A Chinese friend wrote letters for me but I haven’t received any answer from my parents. Have they forgotten me? Where do I belong?

Even though there was a lot of discrimination against Chinese people in America, life in China for a young woman from a poor family was even worse. Polly made up her mind to stay. But what would she do? Where would she live?

At that time, a Chinese person could not buy property. Charlie could, with Polly’s money. He bought a boarding house for her. Before long, Polly’s boarding house was a popular place for people who passed through or miners who stayed longer. She was a good listener to their tales of woe and troubles.

Soon, Polly had woes of her own. Mining towns were violent places. Charlie got shot in the cheek.

“Will he make it?” Polly’s voice shook.

“I’m sorry, Polly. I’ve done all I could,” the doctor said. “Just make him comfortable till the end.”

It was then that Polly realized Charlie meant more to her than just a friend.

“Charlie won’t die. You see, I take care of him.”

Week after week, Polly nursed Charlie back to health. She packed herbs over the wound. She made nutritious soups to help him get strong. With Charlie’s recovery, Polly gained respect from the community for her loyalty and nursing skill.

Everyone in Warren knew Polly. Women were few and they were generally not respected. But this Chinese woman was trustworthy, kind and cheerful.

Charlie and Polly were married after his recovery. Soon after, Charlie took her by boat eighteen miles up the Salmon River. The land Charlie wanted to buy at the bottom of the canyon was flat enough to make a homestead.

“Well, what do you think?” Charlie asked.

“I love this wild place,” Polly said. “Need hard work.”

With her blessing, Polly and Charlie became the first to settle by the Salmon River. They kept chickens, a dog, a cow, and a few horses. Using farming skills learned from her childhood in China, she nurtured the soil and coaxed cabbage, beans, corn, and fruit trees to grow strong and bountiful.

Polly hauled water from the river. She fed the animals. She chopped wood. Although life was not easy on this rugged patch of land, she was content. The babble of the river and the wildlife around her soothed her.

Charlie and Polly lived an isolated life until Peter Klinkhammer and Charlie Shepp settled across the river. The new neighbors became best friends. They took Polly’s produce as well as their own to Warren to sell and buy necessities, such as coffee, soap, thread and fishing gear.

She made friends with prospectors who passed her homestead. “I feed you a good meal.”

This five-foot tall Chinese pioneer, brown and wrinkled from the sun and age, became a folk legend. Journalists and visitors traveled to see this feisty woman who told them her improbable life story.

One day, in the summer of her 28th year on their homestead, Polly was fishing on the banks of the river.

Fire! She saw smoke licking out the upstairs window of the room where Charlie was bedridden. Her heart raced as fast as her feet to save Charlie.

“Hurry, Peter!” she shouted to her neighbor as he crossed the river on a boat. Peter and Polly carried Charlie down the stairs through the smoke.

After the fire, Charlie and Polly stayed with the neighbors. Sadly, Charlie died several months later. Lost in grief, Polly again wondered. What’s going to happen to me?

She closed her eyes and saw the image of the bamboo that grew in her village.

I am like a bamboo. A bamboo is strong and it bends in the wind. I will bend but not break!

“Can you build me a small cabin right where the old one was?” Polly asked her neighbors.

“American soil in my fingernails; here to stay.”

Polly’s neighbors built her a small cabin on the same spot of the burned home. She lived there alone for ten years, a pioneer to the end.

Polly had found her place in the world in the wilderness of the Northwest. A girl who was sold for two bags of seeds became a pioneer woman!

Author’s Note:

Gong Heng was born in China in 1853. Her farming family was rich enough that Gong Heng’s feet were bound. At that time, foot binding was still practiced in China. Women with small feet were thought be feminine. Girls as young as five or six, from well-to-do families, had bindings on their feet to prevent them from growing. It was a painful process and the feet became grossly deformed.

When Gong Heng’s family fell into hard times, her mother released the binding so the girl could help in farming. Her feet were already deformed and never grew to full size. As a result, her gait was an unusual rolling one.

During the late 19thcentury, many Chinese women were brought to the United States, mostly against their will. Gong Heng was one of them. When she was a young teenager, a prolonged drought ruined the harvests, and the countryside was overrun by bandits. In desperation, her family sold her to a group of bandits for two bags of seeds for the next planting. She was their slave until she was sold to a woman who smuggled her to the United States.

A Chinese man in Warren, Idaho, probably bought Gong Heng sight unseen through a middleman. Now known as Polly in Warren, she was very resourceful and hard working. She learned the cooking styles and customs of White folks. She was renowned for her kindness and nursing skills. To the White residents and miners of Warren, Polly was an eyeopener. They were accustomed to the poor Chinese miners who lived in shacks in another part of the town. Polly was feisty, cheerful and intelligent. Unlike the dancing girls in the saloons, she was a woman they respected.

Still, America didn’t seem like home to her until her husband, Charlie Bemis, bought a small piece of land by the Salmon River in 1922. It was there that Polly became a pioneer woman, living off the land and making it a home.

At the age of 80, Polly suffered a stroke. Her neighbors took her to a hospital in Grangeville 87 miles away. But she died and was buried in Grangeville. Fifty-four years later, her remains were exhumed and reburied next to her home on the Salmon River.

Polly never could become a citizen of the United States, even by marriage. In 1943, ten years after her death, the law that denied naturalization to Chinese immigrants was repealed.

At the time of her death, she was well-known in Idaho. Journalists wrote about her. Polly’s restored cabin is now listed in the National Register of Historic Places, and she was inducted into the Idaho Hall of Fame in 1996. Her belongings are displayed in the Idaho State Museum. Polly had become a legend.

Bibliography

Elsensohn, M. Alfreda, Idaho Chinese Lore, Idaho Corporation Of Benedictine Sisters Cottonwood, Idaho. 1993

Wegars, Priscilla, Polly Bemis, Caxton Press, Caldwell, Idaho. 2020

http://americansall.org/legacy-story-individual/polly-bemis (accessed 2-9-2021)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A City of Thieves

A City of Thieves

“What we call casual poetry—verses written on kitchen napkins, often forgotten—reminds us that poems are a natural part of human expression… or at least, they should be. My hope is to capture the antagonistic nature of humanity in the 21st century. How does one capture such corruption on paper? The ethics of industries and modern work culture are major topics of debate. What good is individualism if it leads to the downfall of one’s well-being? Each poem is a cry from humanity. The pieces explore the lives of various people and their environments. Both a billionaire oil company CEO and a burned-out office worker have a connection to their environments. My hope is to preserve the fleeting present. Each poem follows how industrial, political, and economic changes have influenced humanity as a whole. The poems are meant to bring attention to the peculiarities… or struggles of various people.”

—Suprya Sarkar, 16, Connecticut.

 

It is May and I’m still jobless.

I thought this city was meant to give birth to dreams.

What dreams, they can only devise schemes.

 

I would rent out a place

But penny tosses and angry bosses consume my day.

I wonder if they truly hold up to their promises of Agony… obliteration. 

 

The pencil taps

Or the ticking of my twelve-dollar watch

Has room for little patience in their world.

I fantasize about what to say.

 

Like a parakeet reciting words to catch bait,

I revise my questions.
For how many times,

Who is to say?

 

They close the door on the poor man in white.

Goddammit,

A university degree

And I’m just as broke as that streety?  

 

My friends from home don’t bother to pick up the Phone.

Ring, Ring, oh shoot,

My phone bill is laying on the floor.

 

Why bother trying to restore the old?

A long-neglected Porsche,

Yeah, I think that’s who I am.

 

What is all this brooding for?

I am writing home

As if even my own mother remembers my name.

Don’t worry they say,

“You’ll get your own place someday!”

—Suprya Sarkar, age 16, originally from Bangladesh, now lives in Connecticut.

Mr. Liberation Theology

Mr. Liberation Theology

 

The house of sand you built at last.

Tell me, friend, do you think it will withstand a world so vast?

 

You wrecked sandcastles just to build signs seeking justice.

Children sleep out in the cold.

Oh heavens watching above, is this justice?

 

The blanket the child holds onto is an oasis.

Its warmth mimics that of a home so far away.

The desert was his home; a long-forgotten friend.

Every wind feeds him the false promise of freedom.

 

What do they know?

What do they know of the sun’s kiran* when mother would feed us šāy.*

 

USA!

Is that how they play?

The warplanes outnumber the birds.

Children close your eyes, they are fighting for pay.

 

You can not hide in this world.

You are solely bare, exposed, naked even!

What man was born with cloth? Point me to him and then I will abandon my home.

 

And though you can drink your coffee

So black, filling up the glass

That same coffee will stare you back.

Black is the oil you pull from a land so boundless.

 

Who is brave enough to claim the desert as his own?

You can not rule. You fool!

Many tried and failed to seize this land.

For centuries it stands, unbroken by your nuclear adornments.

For the Desert is a lion, no simple house cat.

 

He who dares to challenge shall be left broken in the end.

The pools of oil have all dried up;

Your thirst can never be quenched.

 

* Kiran: ray;    šāy: thick creamy top layer on boiled milk

By Suprya Sarkar, age 16, originally from Bangladesh, now lives in Connecticut. She adds:

“What we call casual poetry—verses written on kitchen napkins, often forgotten—reminds us that poems are a natural part of human expression… or at least, they should be. My hope is to capture the antagonistic nature of humanity in the 21st century. How does one capture such corruption on paper? The ethics of industries and modern work culture are major topics of debate. What good is individualism if it leads to the downfall of one’s well-being? Each poem is a cry from humanity. The pieces explore the lives of various people and their environments. Both a billionaire oil company CEO and a burned-out office worker have a connection to their environments. My hope is to preserve the fleeting present. Each poem follows how industrial, political, and economic changes have influenced humanity as a whole. The poems are meant to bring attention to the peculiarities… or struggles of various people.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stand OUT

Stand OUT

Smart
Smarter
Smartest
That’s all they care about in this test
Your Creativity doesn’t matter
Your Hardwork doesn’t matter
the Blood sweat and tears you put in doesn’t matter
It’s all about the score in the end
This toxic cycle of making us believe
Believe this is what we have to do to fit in
Fit in with society
Fit in with the crowd
Fit into the jigsaw puzzle
When you’re your very own work of art
For how long does this go on
For how long does this cycle go on
This cycle of blending us all together as one
Until we’re broken and bleeding pieces
Working together in blurred masses
Towards a goal that was never ours
Stop
Make it all stop
Stop making us believe we’re jigsaw pieces
Stop making us believe that we’ve got no choice
No voice
That we cannot be a counterpoise
That we’re nothing more than a mere small voice
Stop making us believe we aren’t our own masterpieces
Stop making us believe that we’ve got to fit in
When we were born to stand out

Likhita Makam is a 15-year-old Indo-American high school student living in India. She has been published in youth newspapers and literary magazines. She’s an avid reader and is up for a poetry discussion at all times. She hopes to inspire people of all ages with her words.

While the World was Fixated on the Folly of Billionaires

While the World was Fixated on the Folly of Billionaires

So many of us are mesmerized by the plight of billionaire folly, yet our society is turning a blind eye to the very real horrors of the world’s refugees, seeking survival. While the billionaire submersible was imploding last month reminding us all of the power of our oceans’ depths, and an oft-absent respect for the power of nature, a ship crowded with refugees sunk near the coast of Greece and as many as 700 women and children drowned. The officials in boats did nothing to help, they simply watched in the as the refugees drowned. So much of this world’s politics and cruelty are so reprehensible… so much cruelty when there could be compassionate sharing and life saving help! This new painting insisted on coming into the world. I cannot and art will not be silent on the insanity of this all!!!

You can read an insightful article by Amy Goodman & Denis Moynihan in Democracy Now! https://www.democracynow.org/2023/6/23/greece_migrant_shipwreck_media_coverage

Art and words by Asante Riverwind, artist, Eugene, Oregon.

Consumption

Consumption 

By Lucy Jones, age 15, Wales, U.K.

I wish to consume every piece of media that adorns the Earth
Every book, film, and song
Every day I panic, thinking about how little time I have
How little in my minuscule life I can truly consume
I wish to cry every tear and smile every smile
I wish to feel the most harrowing heartbreak and the most jovial joy
I wish to travel the world
I wish to play every game
I wish to meet every person 
In all my wishing, I never seem to take action
In all the endless possibilities, I take after none of them
In the end, all I do is wait
I wait for the right moment
Just the right book
Just the right film
Just the right person
When all I wish for is everything, I achieve nothing.

—Lucy Jones, Age 15, Wales, United Kingdom.

 

Pinckney Island National Wildlife Refuge

Pinckney Island National Wildlife Refuge

By Roi J. Tamkin, Georgia.

A great way to experience nature and the outdoors without traveling to remote parts of the country is a visit to a National Wildlife Refuge. There are 588 National Wildlife Refuges, or NWRs, across the United States alone. Chances are very good there’s a NWR near you.

NWRs are managed by the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service. Their number one priority is to protect native species. Their second big purpose is recreation. NWRs are great for outdoor hiking, exploring and fishing. If you live near a refuge by the water, you can even go boating. The Fish and Wildlife Service manages land and water resources to create the optimal environment for all the plant and animal species that call these refuges home.

 

 

Downey Woodpecker in Cattails

I recently visited Pinckney Island off the southern coast of South Carolina. This NWR is part of a chain of islands along the Atlantic Flyway that attracts thousands of birds each year. The island is an important rookery for coastal birds.

Common Moorhens on their Nesting Site

Pinckney Island is named after the Revolutionary War veteran Major General Charles Cotesworth Pinckney who purchased the island to grow cotton. The refuge was established in 1975 and consists of 4,035 acres and includes many small islands around Pinckney, the largest one. These islands support a wide variety of plant and animal life found in South Carolina. 

A Coot

During my visit to Pinckney, I saw plenty of moorhens and coots in the freshwater ponds on the island. I also saw three very large alligators in one pond. That’s three too many for me! White-tailed deer roam the island, but are hard to find since they generally avoid people.

A Friendly Armadillo

But a friendly armadillo did come out of the brush to visit me. I also saw dolphins in the creek running along the eastern side of the island. There is also a historical shell mound built by Archaic Indians 4,000 years ago. Sadly, it is covered up by centuries of vegetation, but you can still walk to the spot where the mound is located. Nearby Hilton Head Island has a preserved mound you can visit and learn about the ancient people that migrated through the coast of the southern U.S.

 

 

Spanish Moss on Oak Trees

The NWR near you may not have alligators or 4,000-year-old relics, but it may have something unique to where you live. Check your local maps or do a search for a wildlife refuge near you and enjoy a day outdoors with nature.

—Roi J. Tamkin is a photographer based in Atlanta, Georgia.

 The Big Gardens

 The Big Gardens

By Geraldine De Goeas, California

The tall iron gates stood wide open in welcome. Nadine read the large overhead sign. The Botanical Gardens. She grinned. No one in Guyana called it that. It was ‘The Big Gardens,’ simply because it was big, and also to differentiate it from the Promenade Gardens, known as ‘The Small Gardens’.

Towering palm trees lined the main walkway. The sweet scent of Frangipani filled the air.

“Which way to the manatee pond, Brother?” Nadine asked.

“Stop calling me Brother.” Nadine’s older brother Julio wagged his finger at her. Then he said, “We’ll go see the flowers first, check out the band and…”

Nadine sucked her teeth. “I came to feed the manatees. I don’t want to see flowers or listen to any old band.”

“Too bad,” Julio retorted. “The manatees won’t come to eat until it’s cooler. I’ll buy you a shave-ice and…”

“So why bring me now?” Nadine interrupted, stamping her foot.

“Because Mummy told me to. But we can go home,” Julio threatened.

Nadine’s lips formed a tight line. I’m not going home, she thought. What I came for is right here. She thought back to the first time she saw the manatees. How she found them ‘So awesome.’ “God’s gentle giants,” her mummy had called them. Nadine pictured them moving, ever so slowly, in the water. No splashing or thrashing; making hardly a ripple on the water’s surface. She remembered their small round eyes that seemed to twinkle as they spotted the eager crowd, offering all that delicious grass. No, Nadine would not be going home. Now that her mother had finally declared her old enough, Nadine was here to feed a manatee, and nothing would stop her.

“I’ll have a pineapple shave-ice,” she muttered grudgingly.

The sweet pineapple juice poured over crushed ice did little to change Nadine’s disappointment. She lagged behind Julio, ignoring the circles of delicate roses, colorful zinnias, and bright yellow marigolds that surrounded her. She shuffled along the dirt path, angrily kicking up dust with the tip of her yachting shoes.

Suddenly, a black bee zipped past Nadine’s nose. Nadine’s head snapped back instantly, but her eyes followed the bee cautiously. She saw it circle, then zoom, into the dark center of a large golden sunflower. As she watched, Nadine’s eyes grew wide and round like matching silver dollars. “Awesome,” she whispered.

“You coming?” shouted Julio.

Nadine ran to her brother. “Oh, Brother!” she exclaimed. “I saw a bee with its head shoved deep into a flower sucking up nectar, just the way my teacher said,” she blurted out excitedly. “Awesome.”

“Hey, I’ll show you something really awesome,” was Julio’s reply. Leading Nadine away from the flower beds, across a metal footbridge that twanged loudly with every footstep, Julio guided her to the far end of the gently running stream they had just crossed.

Huge round leaves, like giant plates, lay on the water’s surface. Pure white flowers, big as water-coconuts, with pointed oval petals, sat between the leaves, gleaming like jewels in the brilliant sunshine. Nadine gasped. Her mouth formed a perfect “O.”

“Victoria lilies,” Julio explained. “Guyana’s special flower. Named after a queen.”

“Oh, Brother, this is double awesome. God sure makes beautiful things.”

And as if in agreement, music filled the air. Recognizing a folksong she knew, Nadine sang aloud, “There’s a brown girl in the ring…”

Julio grabbed his sister’s hand. “Let’s go!” he yelled. And with the wind whistling in their ears, they ran toward the music. Soon, the bright red dome of the bandstand loomed before them. Groups of people dotted the surrounding grassy area; some singing like Nadine to the tune the bandsmen, in their crisp navy uniforms and shiny silver buttons were playing, “She likes sugar, and I like plums.”

Julio threw himself on the lawn and pulled Nadine down with him.

Soon, Nadine’s shoulders were rocking and her body swaying as she sang along with the spectators. “This is fun, Brother. Will you bring me again?”

“Only if you stop calling me Brother.”

Nadine’s forehead wrinkled into a frown. She loved Julio. He was her brother. Why shouldn’t she say so? She’d be happy if he called her Sister.

“Now to the manatee pond.”

Delighted at Julio’s words, Nadine immediately forgot her brother’s threat and sprang up to follow him.

Noisy children, protective parents, and many teenagers stood or sat by the water’s edge. Brother and sister searched for clumps of clean, young grass, then squatted by the water and waited.

The late afternoon sun peeking between the over-hanging Poinciana trees made dancing shadows on the still water.

“Here they come,” someone whispered. Nadine’s eyes lit up. Her heart pounded with excitement. The crown of a manatee’s wrinkled head appeared inches above the water. Then another, and another. As the mammals moved closer, people waved their fists of clutched grass hoping to attract a manatee’s attention.

“The grass, Daddy, hurry!”

At Nadine’s right, a boy about her age sat, both legs in braces, leaning sideways straining to find his father.

In seconds, a manatee’s head popped up out of the water, close to Nadine and the boy. It’s thick round lips opened wide; the two halves of it’s upper lip jiggled as if signaling to be fed.

“Daddy, Daddy.”

Nadine saw the boy’s lips tremble. She saw tears flood his eyes. She knew that feeling. She remembered her anger and her tears whenever her mommy had said, “Not until you’re older.”

Nadine eyed the manatee’s jiggling lips. So close. Quickly she extended her arm and offered her fist-full of grass. “Here take this,” she said to the boy.

“But Nadine…” Julio began.

“It’s okay,” Nadine said. “You’ll bring me another day, right Brother?”

Julio’s eyes misted up. He hugged his sister and nodded, “I promise.”

By Geraldine De Goeas, California. She adds: “I was born and educated in what was then British Guyana. These botanical gardens were my playground of choice growing up.”

Army Recruiting in Schools Needs to Stop

Army Recruiting in Schools Needs to Stop

By Avah Keyhani, grade 8, California.

In 2016, more than 60 percent of military enlistments came from neighborhoods with a median household income between $38,345 and $80,912.[1] That means that there are more lower income families in the military, most likely because those families saw the military as a chance to help their economic standing. The truth is, if there was another way to lift families out of poverty, then the military’s recruitment rates would go down, and no one would be joining the military to get money for college or grad school. As it is, that’s exactly what they’re doing. They are using young people in lower income families and giving them a choice: join us and become a hero or live in poverty. Of course, the military kind of beats around the bush when it comes to murdering others and very possibly dying yourself. When you’re younger, you’re more impulsive and more easily persuaded, so the military preys on younger minds. That’s why military recruiters need to get out of schools and stop going after lower income families.

If a young person isn’t joining the military of their own free will, they shouldn’t be joining at all. The military doesn’t want college to be free because their recruitment relies on poorer people enlisting in exchange for funds for college. Many choose to be part of the military because of the promise of college ahead. Take that away, and their recruitment rates will drop (which is good). Common Dreams quotes a GOP lawmaker who Tweeted, “By forgiving such a wide swath of loans for borrowers, you are removing any leverage the Department of Defense maintained as one of the fastest and easiest ways of paying for higher education.” Does the lawmaker not realize he’s literally admitting that college degrees and crushing debt are being used as leverage? And that he’s saying that the military relies on young, poor people and threatens them with poverty? Commenting on this republican lawmaker, Our Wisconsin Revolution argued on Twitter, “The GOP is admitting that the military relies on poor young people to keep the war machine going, and that’s why they oppose canceling student debt…The price of a college degree should not be bloodshed or a lifetime of crippling debt.”

If someone wants to join the military because they enjoy dropping bombs on people, fine. But most people join to pay for a degree, or because of some advertisement. That’s wrong. People shouldn’t have to kill others to get a college degree. Nor should they have to live with debt. War has a terrible effect on the human mind and young people shouldn’t have to deal with that just to go to college or grad school.

The military targets lower income families. According to NNOMY “…Schools with a high proportion of low-income students serve as a magnet for the military. Take the example of two similarly sized high schools in two Hartford suburbs: Avon and Bloomfield. Army recruiters visited Avon High, where only 5 percent of students qualify for free or reduced-price lunch, four times during the 2011-12 school year. Yet at Bloomfield High, where nearly half the students qualify for such assistance, recruiters made more than 10 times as many visits.” That means that they spent more than forty days at Bloomfield high (that’s more than once a week!) and four days at Avon. They spent so much more time at the school where half of the kids needed help paying for their lunch, and barely any time at the school where five percent needed help. That’s blatantly obvious and disgusting. The military is exploiting people that come from lower income families because people who come from lower income families will have a harder time paying for college.

Kids shouldn’t be subjected to the kind of violence the military engages in, especially those who are under twenty-five and whose prefrontal cortexes are not fully developed. According to Heathline, “While many people have endured the hell of war and escaped unscathed, young people who experienced personal trauma before service are the most likely to develop lasting mental health issues after serving in combat.” Well, what kids are more likely to have experienced trauma? Poor kids, which is exactly the group the military is going after. Also, can you ‘endure the hell of war and escape unscathed?’ Can you watch people die, maybe some of your friends and others by your own hand, and go back to life like nothing happened? I don’t believe so, especially if your brain hasn’t fully developed.

According to inequality.org, “Research reveals numerous physical and mental health risks from joining the military at a young age—including higher rates of substance abuse, depression, PTSD, and suicide.” This is common knowledge, knowledge that the military surely has, so why are they continuing to recruit kids even though they know what may happen to them further down the line? It seems like the military purposely feeds on younger soldiers who don’t quite have the mental capacity yet to think ‘wait, why am I doing this?’ If this country really cared about the next generation, they would be helping the kids make a life for themselves rather than recruiting them into the military and exposing them to violence.

The military isn’t something you should be joining to get a degree. The right to education should be assured, not something that lower-income families will either have to go into debt for or be willing to kill people for. And with younger people, who agree to join the military on the promise of paid-for college, it severely attacks their mental and physical health. If the government cares more about being the biggest bully in the playground than caring about their own young people’s mental health, they have no business being the government.

Avah Keyhani, grade 8, California. She writes: “…I am a bilingual Iranian American who speaks Farsi and English. The most important things in my life are my family, friends, my books, and standing up for myself and my ideas. I would very much like to become a scientist and I have an interest in epidemiology. I was inspired to write my essay after reading about the amount of people who join the military at a young age and are scarred for life.”

 

[1]https://www.brookings.edu

Six Things I Learned from Shadowing in A Hospital

Six Things I Learned from Shadowing in a Hospital

The Perspective of a 16-Year-Old

The genesis of my interest in science began when I was around six years old when I would listen to my neurosurgeon mother dictate notes after performing her cases. As soon as she finished, I would ask her to explain the terminology and methods she used to execute the surgeries. At that age I didn’t truly understand what she would tell me, but as the years went on, I learned more about medical-related terms and became more curious about the scientific concepts around me that I had not previously considered. For instance, whenever I was on the train and saw an advertisement for vitamins or hair loss, I would look online to explore these topics more to understand their medical underpinnings.

This curiosity didn’t extend solely to advertisements on the subway; when we were taught a concept in science class, I would investigate it further at home, whether it was Newton’s Laws or the digestive system of a sea cucumber. Outside of school, I started reading books on neuroscience, marine biology, and anatomy when I was around 12 years old.

Beyond my personal research, I have explored and shared my interests by becoming a co-founder and co-head of my school’s Medical Club, an ambassador for YWIB (Young Women in Bio), and an ambassador for Cancer Pathways. To further pursue (and ideally cement) my desire to be a doctor, I spent this past summer traveling to Costa Rica and Ecuador for medical missions. I volunteered in mobile clinics, learned about these countries’ healthcare systems, and analyzed how their systems impact the population.

Prior to going on these missions, TV shows and movies made up my perception of the experience of working in a hospital. However, after I came home from these overseas trips, I spent a week volunteering at my local hospital, and I quickly realized that these preconceived notions were mostly false. In this piece below, I point out six things I noticed while working at the hospital to show the reality of this environment. Additionally, as a teenager and a first-time hospital volunteer, I had a new perspective when writing this article.

—Pearl Marks.


I have always wanted to be a doctor. As long as I can remember, I’ve been fascinated by the ways the different systems and parts of the human body function together, and by the way a team of doctors can help people heal when things go wrong.

This past summer, I finally had the chance to spend a week volunteering at a hospital and shadowing a surgeon. As a high school junior, I realize that I still have a lot of study ahead of me before I can even apply to med-school, but visiting the hospital left me all the more excited by all there is to learn. What follows are the observations I made during my time at the hospital.

1. You’re always moving.

At the start of the first day, the surgeon and I walked into the office only to drop off our bags and leave immediately to visit patients in the nearby exam room. I soon realized that the buffer between patient exams was used for appointments that ran long; when we finished each meeting, we immediately moved to the next exam room or the surgeon’s office to see another patient. By 2:30pm, we still hadn’t eaten lunch, and had time only to take quick bites of our sandwiches as we moved from room to room. Even during days reserved for surgical procedures, you’re still on your feet from the moment you arrive in the operating room.

2. The hospital is a maze.

Getting to the hospital is straightforward, but as soon as you need to move between departments, you face a bewildering layout of buildings connected by above ground bridges. Even within a speciality, for example, travel between a physician’s office, examination rooms, and patient recovery center can require several minutes of fast walking. After operations, it took us at least 5 minutes to get to the operating rooms or to the level where patients stay after their surgeries. As the week went on, I realized how the connections between the hospital’s spaces reflect not only the way different specialties work together, but also the complexity of the healthcare system as a whole.

3. Scheduling is an art form.

On several afternoons, I worked in the back office and was able to help with scheduling and insurance documentation. Given the complexity of the intake process, I was surprised by how many patients didn’t even show up for their appointments. Even more surprising, however, was that missed appointments didn’t make the day any less busy for the doctor. Patient exams often run long so that the doctor can properly analyze test results or answer questions. The office support team needs to determine how many patients to schedule each day so that the doctor won’t be overwhelmed, given that some of them will cancel.

4. Surgery involves the entire hospital.

TV shows don’t come close to showing the activity of the operating room. Even before the medical team arrives, the room feels packed with the complex machinery and supplies that operations require. The first person to arrive is the scrub nurse, who sets up the surgical instruments and prepares to assist the surgeon. Next arrives the charge nurse, who manages the entire environment of the operating room. The anesthesiologist administers anesthesia and any other drugs required throughout the operation, and, for the surgeries I attended, an additional neuromonitoring technician was present to analyze the electrical activity of the brain. In some cases, more than one attending surgeon is present and they work in parallel.

5. Operations follow a strict procedure.

Every operating room displays a detailed wall placard listing key operation goals and safety precautions. Before every surgery, everyone present is required to review the listed sequence. During a surgical procedure, there are specific responses to different complications that might arise, so that all the doctors present know how they’ll work together no matter what situation they find themselves in. Even before the staff members enter the room, they have to scrub their hands for at least five minutes, and to rinse and dry them according to protocol; they even put on their surgical gowns and double-glove their hands in a specific order. In addition to protecting the patient at all stages of the operation, these strict sequences allow the physician to focus on the most critical decisions during the operation.

6. Patience is everything.

Even with strict procedures in place, the surgeon’s entire schedule of the day is in flux. Whether it comes to rephrasing simple questions, repeating explanations, or even guiding a patient slowly down the hall, patience is the key to all a doctor does. One day, during a surgery that required two surgeons, one doctor ran late from a previous operation, and I noticed that even if a few members on the team were annoyed by the delay, they maintained their focus and calm, and they completely shielded their patient from any feeling of delay or frustration. Proper care takes time.

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My experience volunteering showed me that the work of a surgeon is far more complex than I had expected. Instead of deterring me, however, seeing the process made me all the more inspired to one day become a doctor myself. By working in the actual hospital environment, I not only learned about the great variety of roles, but also about the complex and gratifying experience of collaboration that plays out between the different specialties.

If you have any interest in medicine, I encourage you to do anything you can to find a volunteer opportunity at a hospital. Even if it’s a bit overwhelming, visiting the hospital will inspire you in your work today and help you imagine your own life in medicine in the future.  

—Pearl Marks has recently turned 17. She lives in New York.